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stocks:
backround by :iconjantiff-stocks: [link]
little boy by :iconeirian-stock: [link]
spirit by :iconjagged-eye: [link]
owl by :iconnefarostock: [link]
bat by :iconelevit-stock: [link]
shoes by :iconsadoniasstock: [link]
fog brush by :iconelizavetbrushes: [link]
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Here is the critique you requested:

Pros: This manipulation has a good compositional placement which follows the rule of 2/3rds. I also feel that having an isolated area of color saturation on the woman carrying the lamp is creating good contrast and thus good focus.

Cons: I feel that could be changed is the background which I feel is too dark which in turn is flattening out your image. I would suggest lighting the background up about 5% and this will create a stronger background. Lastly you have a background and middle ground but no foreground. I would suggest adding something to the foreground like more mushrooms or something in the forest for added depth.